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Change: of the following connectors: whereas, thus, therefore, otherwise, although, unless, on the other hand, - Post the story on the blog as a comment under the post you liked best (either Niagara or Grand Canyon) <object type="application/x-shockwave-flash" allowScriptAccess="never" allowNetworking="internal" height="285" width="381" align="middle" data="
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Change: of the following connectors: whereas, thus, therefore, otherwise, although, unless, on the other hand, - Post the story on the blog as a comment under the post you liked best (either Niagara or Grand Canyon) <object type="application/x-shockwave-flash" allowScriptAccess="never" allowNetworking="internal" height="285" width="381" align="middle" data="
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Change: of the story (100-150(130-160 words) using at least 5 of the following connectors: whereas, thus, therefore, otherwise, although, unless, on the other hand, - Post the story on the blog as a comment under the post you liked best (either Niagara or Grand Canyon)
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Change: Create a short summary of the story (100-150 words) using at least 5 of the following connectors: whereas, thus, therefore, otherwise, although, unless, on the other hand, - Post the story on the blog as a comment under the post you liked best (either Niagara or Grand Canyon)
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Mar 29 2008, 7:31 PM EDT
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Change: how Niagara Falls froze over one year, how a schoolteacher survived going down the falls in a barrel, why they stopped the water of the
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Mar 28 2008, 10:45 AM EDT
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Change: Prepositions because of, due to, as a result of Due to the stressful nature of high level positions, professionals can sometimes be extremely impatient. Find Connectors which express the following here: Connectors- Condition- Contrast- Comparison- Cause Effect- Opposition- Addition Quiz Time! Connectors Quiz 2
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Mar 28 2008, 10:40 AM EDT
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Change: There were only format changes (bold, italics, etc.) in this version. See this version for details.
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Mar 28 2008, 10:39 AM EDT
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Change: extremely impatient. Prepositions because of, due to, as a result of Due to the stressful nature of high level positions, professionals can sometimes be extremely impatient. Find Connectors which express the following here: Connectors- Condition- Contrast- Comparison- Cause Effect- Opposition- Addition Quiz Time!
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Mar 28 2008, 10:02 AM EDT
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Change: Since high level positions are at times rather stressful, professionals can sometimes be extremely impatient. Conjunctive adverbs therefore, as a result, consequently High level positions are at times rather stressful; therefore, professionals can sometimes be extremely impatient. Prepositions because of, due to, as a result of Due to
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